[wdvltalk-social] Imprint title - help requested

joseph harris smilepoet at vfemail.net
Tue Aug 12 22:39:26 BST 2008


From: "Cheryl D Wise"


> 'think I'd us "On Track" at "Back on Track" since the latter 
> implies trouble
> already I more so to my mind at least than "Get a Grip" or" Get 
> a Handle".
>
> Cheryl D Wise
> MS MVP Expression

Thanks Cheryl. I'm finding lot of resistence to both thoughts... 
'Track' has a lot going for it, but I'm seeing the problems with 
it too. 'Fair treatment' expresses what i want best, but it is 
both interpretable as 2nd rate and presupposes awareness of the 
very thing the book(s) bring out.

It is lacking a dynamic. Several lifetimes ago I came across 
'Know Your Rights' which has that imperative and invitation to 
improve one's position. Perhaps I need to study a few verbs  and 
commands.

Joseph 



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